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You melted to him on the calm black water

As snow does to a fire lull them asleep white ophelia floats;
the river murmurs on the promenade;
that by starlight! framed by a small branch!

In a great bronze chariot the shivering willows.
- golden foam on her hair, the star has wept rose-colour.
Curves of her back whence does he come.
- studded with black where the stars are sleeping.

You melted to him, on the calm black water
embroidered with black moss with soft little shivers
of an eternal voice but endless;

I no longer felt myself, i have seen maelstroms eternal,
never endured more triumphant clamourings the yellow-blue awakenings
trembled to feel, i hung there

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Revisions, envisions,

Thu May 28, 2009, 2:31 PM
Hail and good evening dear readers

I realize I haven't written much here lately, but that is mostly due to the fact that I've been crazy busy at school. To that end, I've been neglecting (haha) my fiction writing or at best going about it halfhearted...

About that first (quasi-) chapter: I rewrote it significantly during one of my "Days off" and have also a kind of sequel to it that needs some fine-tuning. Most times I'm scratching out chapters and chapter ideas at ungodly hours when I'm not doing schoolwork...

So watch for them in a couple of days and comment, comment, comment. That's how we writers get better, right?

Alrighty kiddos, I gotta bounce. Stay deviant :D

Peace, love, and deviance
T

  • Mood: Peaceful
  • Listening to: Massive Attack
  • Reading: In the Flesh, by Victoria Pitts
  • Watching: the clock
  • Playing: my guitar
  • Eating: breakfast
  • Drinking: tea

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